your name

جريحة الايام · 2 ديسمبر 2006، 12:46

:I wrote some words and I want yours opinoin
your name))

I wrote your name in the sky but the wind blew it away

I wrote your name in the sand but the wave blew it away

I wrote your name in the roads but the rain blew it away

I wrote your name in my heart so it will stay for ever

Scream · 2 ديسمبر 2006، 23:42

Wonderful

It's a good start to be writer
It's strange the way you wrote it. Did you intend to speall the words wrong?!!

name
blew
wrote

Keep in writing and you will be a good writer.

Scream
I was a writer $$g

بنـ الكويت ـت · 3 ديسمبر 2006، 0:13

thank you scream for correcting some of the words

and

thanks to

جريحة الايام

for writing these beautiful words

keep going sweetie

عاشق الزهور · 3 ديسمبر 2006، 8:38

thanks allot dear sister very wonderful words very great start in wrinitng i wish you all the best

Scream · 3 ديسمبر 2006، 9:56

بنـ الكويت ـت كتب:

thank you scream for correcting some of the words

and

thanks to

جريحة الايام

for writing these beautiful words

keep going sweetie

I still feel that she spelled these words for a reason behind our knowledge .. Just a feeling.

Scream

أرســــطــــو · 10 ديسمبر 2006، 11:50

great but I think it would be more nice if u tried 2 put the same ends of whole sentences ~!@q

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