My Paper

نزلت السمان · 16 أبريل 2003، 1:00

My Paper

Fill me up
Write down, and on me
give me life to live

Give me identity to keep
to be known by and with

Give me the un-giveable
give me what you promised

Take the olden days
they're not golden in my case

take the whole of me
leave the piece, you've touched
I believe that is the only
alive part of me

Thanks

Nazlat

Max99 · 16 أبريل 2003، 12:38

[TABLE='width:70%;'][CELL='filter: glow(color=blue,strength=2);']Nice poem

I like it very much

the white paper reflects to me

new life

filled with peace, happiness

but unfortunately that

we ruin everything ourselves

and then we blame the society

or we through it to our luck
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The Master · 23 أبريل 2003، 4:26

Once more and as usual, great lovely words, Nazlat. I guess the possibilities of paper can always be Fascinating and worthwhile
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My paper
Intimidates me

Once the door
To my soul
How reluctantly
This flat
White rectangle
Opens now
Anxiously
Pen in hand
I peer
Into the dingy
Depths of my heart
And see
Little there
I remember
From the days
Before
I threw you out
Body and soul
Smiles and laughter
Love and music
All that was you
And yours
I tossed aside
For I could not abide
Sharing you
With any other
I shut you out
Of my heart
I didn't know
My poems would go
My music would
No longer flow
I hadn't thought
The light would die
Or that clouds
Would fill the sky
All beauty fade away
Ah, hold tightly
To a friend
With both trembling
Hands hold fast
For no empty heart
No vacant page
No hollow soul
Is worth
A precious
Loving friend

عواطف · 23 مايو 2003، 22:30

that was very nice one

thanks a lot $$e

Whisper · 23 مايو 2003، 22:41

Thanks nazalat for ur lovely poem

Also thanks for Max and Master for ur lovely and interesting addition

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