َََDo YoU LoVe Me AnD I Am BlInD ََََ

زحمه212 · 29 سبتمبر 2010، 23:09

Hi bro,s and sis,s

how are u

tow days ago i was reading poetry
for

Nizar AL-Qabani

نزار القباني

i love it

The poetry name : Do You Love Me And I Am Blind

اسم الشعر : أتحبيني وانا ضريرة

so
i translate it from Arabic to English

and this is my translation:P

i hope that u like poetry
and this is
personal effort

[FONT=&quot]Do you love me and I am blind!!!

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]She said to him

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Do you love me and I am blind?!

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]In this world many girls

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Which are

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Sweet , beautiful and exciting

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]You are mad and crazy

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Or

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]You are sympathetic to a blind eye girl

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]He said

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]But my sweety I am in love with you

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Only i wish from my life that to be my wife

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]God blessed me with money

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]I do not think healing is impossible

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]She said

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]If you make my optical return back to me

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]I will accept you because you are my destiny

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]I will accept you

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]I will spend all my life with you

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]But

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Who will give me his eyes

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Any night will stay on them

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]One day he came to her quickly

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Rejoice, I found the benefactor

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]You will see what god created and how creativity he

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]is

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]You will keep your promise

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]To be my wife

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]When she opened her eyes

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]He stood holding her hands

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]When she saw him

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]She screamed and yelled..

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Are you blind too ???

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]She cried and cursed her ominous fortune

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]He said

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Don’t be sad my love

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]You will be my guides and my eyes

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]When you will be my wife

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]She said

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Am I marry a blind man?!

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]
&[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Today I become vision

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]He wept

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]And said

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Forgive me

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Who am I to marry me

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]But

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Before [/FONT][FONT=&quot]you leave[/FONT][FONT=&quot] me

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]I want you to promise me

\
\\
\\\
\\\\
\\\\\

[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]To take [/FONT][FONT=&quot]well care [/FONT][FONT=&quot]of [/FONT][FONT=&quot]my [/FONT][FONT=&quot]eyes[/FONT]

my regards

ZaHmA212

^_&

قارئة الفنجان · 29 سبتمبر 2010، 23:17

WoWoWoWoWo
it is really great job bro
and wonderful words from Nizzar
Allah bless you

Best Regards
QaReAa

m!ss flora · 29 سبتمبر 2010، 23:23

poetry

really i thought it is a topic to discuss it
since the title z a Q
any way
brother i like Nizar
&
your kind & very good translation
with the beautiful end
thanks

شوكولاه · 29 سبتمبر 2010، 23:33

it so wonderful and has a sad story

fidelity seems impossible now

good job my brother

and i hope 2 you all the best

Nothing Is Impossible · 29 سبتمبر 2010، 23:41

WOOOOOW!!!! & WOOOOOW

I Love this Lovely Poem soooooo MUCH

It is VERY Touching & Moving

It gives us A lesson in Love and Sacrifice

....

Great Effort My Best Bro Forever...

You have wonderful taste in choise

Brilliant or you are brilliant

Thumbs Up ...

....

We Could reply on this poem by:

If you leave me now, you'll take away the biggest part of me

And if you leave me now, you'll take away the very heart of me

A love like ours is love that's hard to find

How could we let it slip away?0

We've come to far to leave it all behind

How could we end it all this way?0

When tomorrow comes

and we'll both regret things we said today

My Best Regards:

Nothing Is Impossible

:):):)

عجوز كشخة · 29 سبتمبر 2010، 23:52

A touching story

You have a great job my brother

Excellent poet Nizar Qabbani

:)

Thank you my brother

•°« غصة حنين »°• · 30 سبتمبر 2010، 0:22

First:

This story itself I love it for Nizar Qabbani .. May be of the greatest stories of love and sacrifice

Second:

From where did you get this great idea, my brother .. I congratulate you on the excellent work ..

Thank you thank you thank you for gaveing us the opportunity to enjoy the poetry of Nizar Qabbani in English

Great work .. Thank you for the invitation

المصيبة · 30 سبتمبر 2010، 0:24

nice words
forgive i cant complete , because i am hungry
i will come later

بنت أبووووها · 30 سبتمبر 2010، 0:31

nice poetry
I liked it so much __ it has a beautiful story and honest words
thanks my bro
god bless you
greeting to you

سابح بح · 30 سبتمبر 2010، 0:32

Peace be upon you
I hope to see new works
What God
Subject in a very beautiful
What a great word of poetry
Wonderful what you've done to translate

sweet nawras · 30 سبتمبر 2010، 1:07

nice Poem
i lke it ....every time i read nezar poems i discover somethings new about love
thank you bro for Translation:)

The Flower · 30 سبتمبر 2010، 1:20

good choise brother
................
wonderful and very sad story i love it
i like Nizar Qabbani

Waiting for more

accept my regards

باتشي العسوله · 30 سبتمبر 2010، 2:32

[FONT=&quot]w00000w it is nice words my bro
[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I enjoyed reading the words.

[/FONT][FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]My thankfulness & appreciation[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot] [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot] [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]
[/FONT]

عيون هند · 30 سبتمبر 2010، 9:33

I like Nizar but I think this is pretending

and one of men lies

that they are more honest in there feeling

Thanks for the

translation

أيقاع المطر · 30 سبتمبر 2010، 22:08

WoooooooW

I LIKE POETRE IN NIZar

T ThInK PoetrE NIZar

AbA TMAAm

thank YoU MY PRo zAhMaH

IN the ToPiC WonderfuL

زحمه212 · 1 أكتوبر 2010، 14:25

قارئة الفنجان كتب:

WoWoWoWoWo
it is really great job bro
and wonderful words from Nizzar
Allah bless you

Best Regards
QaReAa

hi sis

i am happy to see u here

thanx for lovely comment my sis

cheers

ZaHmA212

زحمه212 · 1 أكتوبر 2010، 14:29

m!ss flora كتب:

poetry

really i thought it is a topic to discuss it
since the title z a Q
any way
brother i like Nizar
&
your kind & very good translation
with the beautiful end
thanks

looooooooooooool
#i#i#i
i think u love discussion

any way
thanx for nice passing my sis
i love your hand writing

thanx again my sis

cheers

ZaHmA212

زحمه212 · 1 أكتوبر 2010، 14:32

شوكولاه كتب:

it so wonderful and has a sad story

fidelity seems impossible now

good job my brother

and i hope 2 you all the best

u are right my sis

its sad
and its show as whats love can do
sacrifice

thanx for passing my sis

cheers

ZaHmA212

^_^

زحمه212 · 1 أكتوبر 2010، 14:37

Nothing Is Impossible كتب:

WOOOOOW!!!! & WOOOOOW

I Love this Lovely Poem soooooo MUCH

It is VERY Touching & Moving

It gives us A lesson in Love and Sacrifice

....

Great Effort My Best Bro Forever...

You have wonderful taste in choise

Brilliant or you are brilliant

Thumbs Up ...

....

We Could reply on this poem by:

If you leave me now, you'll take away the biggest part of me

And if you leave me now, you'll take away the very heart of me

A love like ours is love that's hard to find

How could we let it slip away?0

We've come to far to leave it all behind

How could we end it all this way?0

When tomorrow comes

and we'll both regret things we said today

My Best Regards:

Nothing Is Impossible

:):):)

well done my best sis nothing

your replay is wonderful my sis
it is better than poetry
thanx a million my sis
u always support me in different ways
i hope all the best for u

cheers

ZaHmA212

زحمه212 · 1 أكتوبر 2010، 14:39

عجوز كشخة كتب:

A touching story
You have a great job my brother
Excellent poet Nizar Qabbani
:)
Thank you my brother

thanx my sis ajoooz for nice passing
and u are most than welcome sis

cheers

ZaHmA212

زحمه212 · 1 أكتوبر 2010، 14:43

•°« غصة حنين »°• كتب:

First:
This story itself I love it for Nizar Qabbani .. May be of the greatest stories of love and sacrifice
Second:
From where did you get this great idea, my brother .. I congratulate you on the excellent work ..
Thank you thank you thank you for gaveing us the opportunity to enjoy the poetry of Nizar Qabbani in English
Great work .. Thank you for the invitation

yes my sis
i am agree with u
maybe its greatest and best story about sacrifice
i get it from my mind my sis
thanx my sis for this supporting word
dont thank me my sis
i have to thanx u for great passing
u are most than welcome my sis

cheers

ZaHmA212

RIYAMI 1001 · 2 أكتوبر 2010، 0:31

Brilliant bro .nice adding
Translation wonderful bro zahoom
I love poems of Nizar Kabbani much
his poems always include the meanings and feelings of wonderful
I liked what could be translated to us from the words of a beautiful
As I liked passing here
All the most beautiful greeting to my dear bro
best regards

الميركي"فنان جامعي" · 2 أكتوبر 2010، 2:11

Do You Love Me And I Am Blind

[FONT=&quot]Before [/FONT][FONT=&quot]you leave[/FONT][FONT=&quot] me
[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]I want you to promise me
[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]To take [/FONT][FONT=&quot]well care [/FONT][FONT=&quot]of [/FONT][FONT=&quot]my [/FONT][FONT=&quot]eyes[/FONT]

It was really a stepandous poetry

your translation is really EXCELLANT

i would like to thank u veru very MUCH

HAVE a great life

عاشقة الحرية · 2 أكتوبر 2010، 8:11

Hi Zahoooooom

I relly happy when I read it

It is so romantik

i like this word so mutch

thanks alot ^_^

وليفة الغربة · 2 أكتوبر 2010، 8:21

Thank you my brother"
great work and beautiful..
I liked this words
It is wonderful poem
""
god bless you

ولد الفيحاء · 2 أكتوبر 2010، 21:41

Sophisticated effort Zhom dear dear brother in the translation of Nizar Qabbani poems into English, be afraid Nizar Oman instincts and start writing poetry Qsaid describe women and charms such as Nizar in various poems.
God bless you

أبو فلعـــة · 2 أكتوبر 2010، 22:03

Nice Choice My Brother and
thanks to much for translatino

Good Work My Friend

Best Regards
Abu Fal3a

إماراتية وافتخر · 2 أكتوبر 2010، 22:16

Nice My Bro
:)
good good job
and
قصــة حلوة لكنها حزينة

روح · 3 أكتوبر 2010، 23:19

So nice ... really...

:)
Thanx

زحمه212 · 4 أكتوبر 2010، 11:24

المصيبة كتب:

nice words
forgive i cant complete , because i am hungry
i will come later

looooooooooooool
#i#i
go and eat something

take your time #i#i

thanx for funny passing my sis

cheers

ZaHmA212

مشاركة