My Tree to be

    • My Tree to be



      ‎Short story, from the past ‎
      ‎Happen only few hundreds years back!‎


      ‎My tree to be ‎

      ‎Once upon a time ‎
      ‎I decided to plant a tree ‎
      ‎So, I took my tools ‎
      ‎Went to the nearest cloud, I could see ‎
      ‎Carefully, in the center I dug ‎
      ‎Deep down, almost to the ground ‎
      ‎To have a strong foundation ‎
      ‎To my lovely tree to be ‎

      ‎Nicely cover it ‎
      ‎But I didn’t water it‎
      ‎You see, have you ever seen? ‎
      ‎Anybody watering a plant in the clouds‎
      ‎No, I guess your answer will be ‎

      ‎Proudly, as I was leaving I said to myself ‎
      ‎That was a wise decision you took ‎

      ‎I left straightaway ‎

      ‎Someday, later I went to see ‎
      ‎To my surprise, there was no tree ‎
      ‎I screamed to the top of my voice‎
      ‎I trusted you with my precious tree to be‎
      ‎Oh …clouds what did you do? ‎

      ‎That was too much to take ‎
      ‎So, I sat in one of the clouds ‎
      ‎Wondering ‎
      ‎Could it be me? ‎
      ‎Or the clouds! ‎
      ‎Or maybe my tree to be! ‎
      ‎What did I do wrong? ‎
      ‎Can anybody help me? ‎



      Thanks


      Nazlat


    • Nice story NAZLAT.....well organized

      You chosed the nearst cloud ...
      to keep it nearby ..thats good

      You dugged deeply
      to have astrong foundation....thats Great

      U didnt water it becz u trust on the cloud...
      never mind sometims we trust on others

      But have U asked yourself ....was that its HoMe
      where it can find itself , pleaser ,society $$e

      this is my opinion and I hope other Pals will
      share us their ones

      thanx

      GHASSAN
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      A lovely story with a strong theme. At the beginning i hesitated for i couldn't reply soon. Actually, i was searching for a story similar to this story. So, I recalled my memory and i find a real story that you may find a similar theme to the one of this story.
      It is about a father who worked hard and did his best to send his son abroad to study. He was sure that his son in a forigner country will be able to back with a brighten future. He was totally sure and confident because eeverybody go to that country is considered to be proud when he returned from there. Consequently, the days passed and the years go on and the father was waiting the return of his son$$7 . However, what happened wasn't at all what the father acxepted from his son. His son was totally different from the one he send it some years ago. His son had totally changed while he was there. Actually, he was lost in that country and he met a girl and loved her and he had no attention to go back to his family. To his father who trusted him in that county. The father he was longing to see his son back with a high certify and a brighten future.
      It is the same when we but a person in a strong environment!!!Well he be able to be survived or he will be lost because he is away from his people who has the same of manners of him. It is the same when you plant the tree in a strange place away from its land and where the rest of trees are planted$$7

      So you asked and wondered
      ‎Could it be me? ‎Or the clouds! ‎Or maybe my tree to be! ‎What did I do wrong? ‎Can anybody help me?
      It is you who take the first decision. It is not the fault of the clouds nor the tree!! It is just you$$-e

      With my Regards
      Your sister
      Whisper
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