One Day

آنسه قنبلة · 30 أكتوبر 2003، 0:57

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One Day

I dreamed to get on a cloud

That takes me away from this world

To a world that only seen in dreams

I dream to get in it alone and free

So I close my eyes in silence

And fly like an angel

Alone and free

Swim in the wide space

Touch the clouds, the stars and the moon

Feeling with that wide space

With all my emotions

I was flying and flying

When suddenly I felt with suffocation

In that wide space alone

Like monster attacking me

Then I decided to go back

To my reality

And get away from this nightmare

So I open my eyes

To my real lovely life

Full with beauty and moving creature

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Hope u like it
And of course I accept any critique from u
My Regards

Whisper · 2 نوفمبر 2003، 0:20

I dream to fly away
away from the broken images
flying to the glittering sky
where i could touch the stars
play and dance happily
with the lighting stars
and forget all my sorrow
in a world free of obligations

A lovely poem dear sister
and you by some way touches our feelings
and we all sometimes have imaginations
to fly away
just to forget our obligations
and our crowded life

I hope that you will keep always sharing
us your sweet topics

غسااان · 5 نوفمبر 2003، 23:26

Thanx Miss Bomb
For sharing ur dreems with us
its realy nice imagination
written with a deep nice words

tHanX again

GHASSAN

كيف انساك · 24 نوفمبر 2003، 23:39

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nice dream

tank you dear

for sharing this

great words with us

really..... i like it to much

keep write this for ever

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آنسه قنبلة · 24 نوفمبر 2003، 23:53

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : Whisper
[B]
I dream to fly away
away from the broken images
flying to the glittering sky
where i could touch the stars
play and dance happily
with the lighting stars
and forget all my sorrow
in a world free of obligations

A lovely poem dear sister
and you by some way touches our feelings
and we all sometimes have imaginations
to fly away
just to forget our obligations
and our crowded life

I hope that you will keep always sharing
us your sweet topics
[/B]

Dear Whisper

What you write is more effected than main

I really like ur words dear sis

And happier to see you’re replying

So many thanx for your encouragement

آنسه قنبلة · 24 نوفمبر 2003، 23:56

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : غسااان
[B]Thanx Miss Bomb
For sharing ur dreems with us
its realy nice imagination
written with a deep nice words

tHanX again

GHASSAN

[/B]

Am glad that u read it brother

So thanx a lot for your replying

الدمعه الحزينه · 1 ديسمبر 2003، 11:47

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Take me with you dears
I also want to fly away

come on.............Let's fly all of us!

all the best

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