Beneath a Laughing Face

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 27 أغسطس 2004، 5:33

عاشق الجح · 27 أغسطس 2004، 7:09

Scream · 27 أغسطس 2004، 13:55

A broken heart recalling the happy memorise.. What a beautifull poem.. But, i wonder, who is the poet? Or is it somebody unknown because it is in a card...Or, he or she might be an Australian poet

Thanks A lot 3goooooooz nwar for this lovely poem

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 28 أغسطس 2004، 6:09

عاشق الجح كتب:

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eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 28 أغسطس 2004، 6:11

Scream كتب:

A broken heart recalling the happy memorise.. What a beautifull poem.. But, i wonder, who is the poet? Or is it somebody unknown because it is in a card...Or, he or she might be an Australian poet

Thanks A lot 3goooooooz nwar for this lovely poem

Hey Scream. No, the poet is not Australian certainly.. It's posted as unknown and it's better to remain unknown.. Doesn't matter who wrote it, although the person who wrote it did bring out those old nice memories.. People may look happy but they dont really have to be happy within..

Thanks Scream

Cheers

غسااان · 28 أغسطس 2004، 23:41

thanx nawar
nice poem
" I hide my broken heart beneath a laughing face"
I liked this part i dont know why ...maybe
or could be
express somthing related

thanx again

Ghassan

Tenderness · 29 أغسطس 2004، 2:22

Thanks NaWaR and sorry I could not open the link but can only manage to see the lovely woman , and took me back to some years when I used to write and stopped since as I did not manage to sell a single copy or find a single person to read

Under the title OUR STORY, and at the end I recall writing something like

How sad to see the good days go by
How sad to see the tears in my eye
How sad to see me cry
How sad to know our story was only a lie

Wow, it is getting late and I have no clue of what I am writing

1oderness

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 30 أغسطس 2004، 6:21

غسااان كتب:

thanx nawar
nice poem
" I hide my broken heart beneath a laughing face"
I liked this part i dont know why ...maybe
or could be
express somthing related

thanx again

Ghassan

No worries Ghassan.. yeah, it would somehow be related to some parts within us.. can't post anything if it doesn't touch something in me.. glad you liked it..

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 30 أغسطس 2004، 6:31

Tenderness كتب:

Thanks NaWaR and sorry I could not open the link but can only manage to see the lovely woman , and took me back to some years when I used to write and stopped since as I did not manage to sell a single copy or find a single person to read

Under the title OUR STORY, and at the end I recall writing something like

How sad to see the good days go by
How sad to see the tears in my eye
How sad to see me cry
How sad to know our story was only a lie

Wow, it is getting late and I have no clue of what I am writing

1oderness

Hello Tenderness, please try not to be away for so long or so short.. i

Tenderness, we all go through phases of time during our life time when we used to do things and for some reasons we dont any more. I've learned that no matter what happens, do not stop doing what you are used to do because its part of you, this is you.. leaving our original things we used to do will make us feel bad later on for leaving them..

To OUR STORY, I dont reccommend anyone to feel sad about the days that passed, every day with all the good and bad things should be nice, enjoy them because you are learning from them.. Tears do make us feel better sometimes but try not to cry your eyes out so they get puffed next day.. ;)i

Tenderness, try to come to the forum so late to let us read more of clueless writings.. lol

Cheers

amalsami · 31 أغسطس 2004، 0:47

What is on the poem does not tell memories, but rather a current situation that a lover is living through

I wrote something of almost the exact sort, yet in arabic

Well, it's not the memories that torture a lover after a separate, but the growing love that does'nt stop is what brings memories and makes it harder to accept that the one you love is no longer around you to have what you had and are now just memories

Tenderness · 31 أغسطس 2004، 1:17

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR كتب:

Hello Tenderness, please try not to be away for so long or so short.. i

Tenderness, we all go through phases of time during our life time when we used to do things and for some reasons we dont any more. I've learned that no matter what happens, do not stop doing what you are used to do because its part of you, this is you.. leaving our original things we used to do will make us feel bad later on for leaving them..

To OUR STORY, I dont reccommend anyone to feel sad about the days that passed, every day with all the good and bad things should be nice, enjoy them because you are learning from them.. Tears do make us feel better sometimes but try not to cry your eyes out so they get puffed next day.. ;)i

Tenderness, try to come to the forum so late to let us read more of clueless writings.. lol

Cheers

It is getting late for me, still I will write few things
TEARS, and like you said reflects how swntemental we are. We cry when we are happy, and we cry when we are sad, this is us.....sentemental
This does not mean we are weak, but rather strong with all we carry inside us
Tears could mean devotion, and we are well known for our devotion and willingness to sacrify and die for others

If not satisfied, go for it and cry, at least you give your eyes a wash

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 31 أغسطس 2004، 15:29

amalsami كتب:

What is on the poem does not tell memories, but rather a current situation that a lover is living through

I wrote something of almost the exact sort, yet in arabic

Well, it's not the memories that torture a lover after a separate, but the growing love that does'nt stop is what brings memories and makes it harder to accept that the one you love is no longer around you to have what you had and are now just memories

You are absolutely right sami, you did say the right thing

It does hurt a lot when that love keeps on growing even though we know that person no longer can be with us.. thanks a lot

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 31 أغسطس 2004، 15:32

Tenderness كتب:

It is getting late for me, still I will write few things
TEARS, and like you said reflects how swntemental we are. We cry when we are happy, and we cry when we are sad, this is us.....sentemental
This does not mean we are weak, but rather strong with all we carry inside us
Tears could mean devotion, and we are well known for our devotion and willingness to sacrify and die for others

If not satisfied, go for it and cry, at least you give your eyes a wash

Tenderness.. oh please are you going to write really?? I think crying is something very different.. why is it there?? why does it make you feel better to cry?? Today I was talking to this little boy in his 20s and he felt like crying but held himselve together very well. I felt sorry for him but it's interesting how people cry for things, whether for simple matters or massive ones

Mrs.Unfaithful · 31 أغسطس 2004، 16:22

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR كتب:

Tenderness.. oh please are you going to write really?? I think crying is something very different.. why is it there?? why does it make you feel better to cry?? Today I was talking to this little boy in his 20s and he felt like crying but held himselve together very well. I felt sorry for him but it's interesting how people cry for things, whether for simple matters or massive ones

LoL
LITTLE BOY!!!!!!i

Poor "little" boy... NaWar.. maybe you were harsh on him or something..

but really, i wonder what could possibly make a man cry???i

(maybe we shoudl ask the 'little' boy what made him cry????)i

I think men are very good at hiding their feelings, if they had any at the first place

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 31 أغسطس 2004، 17:33

he was hurt because someone did something he didnt want it to happen because it's related to his future and he is not ready for this sort of situation, not at the moment at least. He felt like crying because he was so concerned about his future and he wants it to be the way he planned for it. He didnt want that someone to get into his business, and that someone is one of the closest people to him

People have different reasons to make them cry, I may not find this good enough to make me cry, to him it was a big deal.. im still amazed of this diversity

Mrs.Unfaithful · 1 سبتمبر 2004، 8:48

I would say he is Daloo3. Period

Once a guy cried becuase truck passing by had a louder engine-sound than his Mustang.

Tenderness · 1 سبتمبر 2004، 14:08

Today I was talking to this little boy in his 20s and he felt like crying but held himselve together very well. I felt sorry for him but it's interesting how people cry for things, whether for simple matters or massive ones

NaWaR ya ajooz, just give him his snicker back and I assure he will not ever cry

Mrs. all people cry, men do and like you said, they hide it, and like I said somewhere here, men's tears are very dear

I cry only for a wash sometimes, eye wash that is, and guess what...........others think I am crying being sad and give me a snicker.....just to make me happy

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 1 سبتمبر 2004، 14:35

Mrs.Unfaithful كتب:

I would say he is Daloo3. Period

Once a guy cried becuase truck passing by had a louder engine-sound than his Mustang.

LoL perfectly sensitive.. hahaha

Tenderness.. I swear I didnt take his snickers, I went and bought my own snickers

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 1 سبتمبر 2004، 14:35

Tenderness كتب:

Today I was talking to this little boy in his 20s and he felt like crying but held himselve together very well. I felt sorry for him but it's interesting how people cry for things, whether for simple matters or massive ones

NaWaR ya ajooz, just give him his snicker back and I assure he will not ever cry

Mrs. all people cry, men do and like you said, they hide it, and like I said somewhere here, men's tears are very dear

I cry only for a wash sometimes, eye wash that is, and guess what...........others think I am crying being sad and give me a snicker.....just to make me happy

So you still cry Mr sensitive guy.. lol

Tenderness · 1 سبتمبر 2004، 23:31

So you still cry Mr sensitive guy

No NaWaR, not any more, thanks for the snicker

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 2 سبتمبر 2004، 6:08

Tenderness كتب:

So you still cry Mr sensitive guy

No NaWaR, not any more, thanks for the snicker

No worries

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