hi everybody
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I write short essay ,but I need someone to correct it for me
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I am in first year in my college
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My talents
can you imagine a person without talents
?
sometimes we have a lot of time without any work , but we need to exercise our skills and talents in this free time . Skills and talents are different from one to onther one.I have some talents such as Reading ,carton drawing,and playing
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first of all,reading is my favorite talent because it is an interesting useful thing that make everyone smart.Any way , you should read a lot of book or magazine to get a lot of information about different thing in your life . Second,cartoon drawing is one of the most special talent because it is make person to be famous in the life.We can draw any thing we want in order to be fun .Last also without playing any game a person feels boring .I think play one game every day is so important to be happy
.
All in all,these are my favorite skills in my life.In my opinion,everyone should have a useful talents in this life.what about you
?
~!@q
,
I write short essay ,but I need someone to correct it for me
...
I am in first year in my college
,
My talents
can you imagine a person without talents
?
sometimes we have a lot of time without any work , but we need to exercise our skills and talents in this free time . Skills and talents are different from one to onther one.I have some talents such as Reading ,carton drawing,and playing
.
first of all,reading is my favorite talent because it is an interesting useful thing that make everyone smart.Any way , you should read a lot of book or magazine to get a lot of information about different thing in your life . Second,cartoon drawing is one of the most special talent because it is make person to be famous in the life.We can draw any thing we want in order to be fun .Last also without playing any game a person feels boring .I think play one game every day is so important to be happy
.
All in all,these are my favorite skills in my life.In my opinion,everyone should have a useful talents in this life.what about you
?
~!@q
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