In this Quiet night

التنين الاحمر · 27 يوليو 2005، 23:53

In this quiet night, I'm waiting for you
During that time, your smile has faded away
Now that a little time has passed,
Fond memories start to resurface.

At the place where stars fall,
I'm always wishing for your laughter.
Even though we're apart now
We can meet again, right?

From when has my smile faded this much
Since it was shattered by one mistake
Change only the precious things into light
Go beyond the sky with fortitude.

To the place where stars fall,
I want my thoughts to reach you.
I am always by your side
Since I will embrace that coldness.
Even though we're apart now,
We will definitely be back together.

In the quiet night
...

Sorrowful Man2 · 28 يوليو 2005، 0:01

Thanks Dear

you did write nice world and I wish to see more

Sorrowful Man2

بنـ الكويت ـت · 28 يوليو 2005، 0:27

very nice poetry

thank you

التنين الاحمر

shift to english discussion room

دانة السلطنة · 1 أغسطس 2005، 11:41

nice <<<<<<<<its really good thing what u are saying i like it soooooo much

go ahead<<<<<<<<<<<<
thxs alot

التنين الاحمر · 1 أغسطس 2005، 13:37

Sorrowful Man2 كتب:

Thanks Dear

you did write nice world and I wish to see more

Sorrowful Man2

oh glad you liked it mate

i have few pomes that i have wrote

you can find them here and there

yea

wait for more of my pomes soon

التنين الاحمر · 1 أغسطس 2005، 13:40

بنـ الكويت ـت كتب:

very nice poetry

thank you

التنين الاحمر

shift to english discussion room

thanx

no problem

i usully put my pomes over there

because it doesnt get alot of attention over here

التنين الاحمر · 1 أغسطس 2005، 13:42

دانة السلطنة كتب:

nice <<<<<<<<its really good thing what u are saying i like it soooooo much

go ahead<<<<<<<<<<<<
thxs alot

thanx sis for your support

just trying to pass my time by writing short pomes

waiting for your comments on my next pomes

NewWay · 1 أغسطس 2005، 16:10

التنين الاحمر كتب:

In this quiet night, I'm waiting for you
During that time, your smile has faded away
Now that a little time has passed,
Fond memories start to resurface.

At the place where stars fall,
I'm always wishing for your laughter.
Even though we're apart now
We can meet again, right?

From when has my smile faded this much
Since it was shattered by one mistake
Change only the precious things into light
Go beyond the sky with fortitude.

To the place where stars fall,
I want my thoughts to reach you.
I am always by your side
Since I will embrace that coldness.
Even though we're apart now,
We will definitely be back together.

In the quiet night
...

Are you sure these are your own words..??

التنين الاحمر · 2 أغسطس 2005، 2:09

NewWay كتب:

Are you sure these are your own words..??

yea it is

Y r u saying so
????

NewWay · 3 أغسطس 2005، 15:32

Nothing, just wondering..

Maybe there were too beautiful...

Keep it up.

البارون · 5 أغسطس 2005، 21:11

"Since it was shattered by one mistake"

one silly mistake usually distroys everything

so watch out when you love

AL~FaReS · 11 أغسطس 2005، 10:57

thanx tetninoooooooooooooooo
really its a wonderful poetry
go on

التنين الاحمر · 11 أغسطس 2005، 20:02

Thanx guys for passing by

RaNaMoOn · 13 أغسطس 2005، 16:05

،،،

Thank bro for this poem

And as I know there is another section or forum for poems

In discussion room people discuss topics

So I’ll shift this poem to the right place

Thanks again

yours sis

Ranamoon

،،،

التنين الاحمر · 14 أغسطس 2005، 18:09

RaNaMoOn كتب:

،،،

Thank bro for this poem

And as I know there is another section or forum for poems

In discussion room people discuss topics

So I’ll shift this poem to the right place

Thanks again

yours sis

Ranamoon

،،،

First of all thanx ranamoon

yooooh

this topic has been moved about three times now

decid where to put it you guys

it was in teh pome section

then some body moved it to the discussion

then into here
$$g

RaNaMoOn · 15 أغسطس 2005، 13:28

التنين الاحمر كتب:

First of all thanx ranamoon

yooooh

this topic has been moved about three times now

decid where to put it you guys

it was in teh pome section

then some body moved it to the discussion

then into here

May be by mistake some body shifted this poem

So never mind this is the right place

Thanks brother

Allah bless you

Mrs.Unfaithful · 17 أغسطس 2005، 13:57

Mashallah

One more of your amazing words... loved it

Its very sensational

But why are your poems about heart-break? ok we get that you have been dumped

Or is it that its easier to write poems about saddness than happiness??s

~!@q

التنين الاحمر · 20 أغسطس 2005، 20:39

RaNaMoOn كتب:

May be by mistake some body shifted this poem

So never mind this is the right place

Thanks brother

Allah bless you

well

it was no mistake it has been shifted to here

but any way forget about it
...

التنين الاحمر · 20 أغسطس 2005، 20:44

Mrs.Unfaithful كتب:

Mashallah

One more of your amazing words... loved it

Its very sensational

But why are your poems about heart-break? ok we get that you have been dumped

Or is it that its easier to write poems about saddness than happiness??s

hahahahaha

well I just write what i feel

it is the easiest way to write a pome

--------------------

BTW

it is good to see your topics back it has been a long time not seeing you around here

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