Mysterious

آنسه قنبلة · 20 نوفمبر 2003، 1:37

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It was midnight when I woke up
I don't know where I am!
Every thing was strange
And the darkness was terrifying

A deep silence
But the wind sound was the only thing
Thad made a sign of life

I was walking alone in that wide wood
With my beautiful whit dress

Deep silence
When suddenly
I hear footsteps walking behind me
So I turned around with shock on my face
At that moment
Every drop of blood inside me froze

Grandmother
What is she doing here?
She passed a way a long time ago
But she is here now!!
How is that?
Is it possible?

She gazed at me
And than seized my hand and pull me
With deep silence
Without talking to me

Something wrong
I'm not in my reality
Where I am

And grandmother
She is not the one who I know
She kept silent all the time
And didn't let go of my arm

Then abruptly
She left me in a dark place
And vanished

She let me along
Facing my unknown destiny
I screamed loudly
But no body could hear me
And the echo of my scream
Was shaking the silence of my loneliness

Than I realized the place that I was in
It was my grave!!

Have you ever thought about your ending?!!

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Whisper · 20 نوفمبر 2003، 15:45

Lovely one what you wrote this time
dear miss bomb

I really liked the way you wrote it and organized it and the background you choose for it
lovely description but so impressive
and it remains us by the same idea that
we pass through it manytimes in our lives
how will our end be? that may scare us
but it is the fact that we can't run away from it

thanks again dear sister for sharing it with you

hope to see more from you

The Master · 21 نوفمبر 2003، 15:41

Have you ever thought about your ending

i would say that this is one of the hardest questions to answer when asked!! Its a really very strong ending for the lovely poem

well chosen words that really get through to you
when reading them

well done Miss bomb. a really good poem

#d #d

آنسه قنبلة · 25 نوفمبر 2003، 0:00

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : Whisper
[B]
Lovely one what you wrote this time
dear miss bomb

I really liked the way you wrote it and organized it and the background you choose for it
lovely description but so impressive
and it remains us by the same idea that
we pass through it manytimes in our lives
how will our end be? that may scare us
but it is the fact that we can't run away from it

thanks again dear sister for sharing it with you

hope to see more from you
[/B]

Many thanx dear whispers for your replying

I’m really glad that u like my simple words

Yes as u say death is the thing that we all afraid of

To be honest I have never thought about death

Until I lose someone who I love and respect suddenly

She was with us …. Every one was shock for losing such person like her

Any way dear thanx again

آنسه قنبلة · 25 نوفمبر 2003، 0:02

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : The Master
[B]Have you ever thought about your ending

i would say that this is one of the hardest questions to answer when asked!! Its a really very strong ending for the lovely poem

well chosen words that really get through to you
when reading them

well done Miss bomb. a really good poem

#d #d
[/B]

Yes brother it is a hard question to answer

But we should think always how our ending will be

Glad to see your replying and encouragement brother

Many thanks

بائع الورد · 26 نوفمبر 2003، 2:16

nice story BOMB
well organized
with lovely expression

thanx for sharing it with us

bye

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