My steps

بائع الورد · 29 نوفمبر 2003، 15:02

My steps

Step after step

Then I realized
I’m standing at
The edge of childhood
Leaving the half of
The spacious Earth at once

Standing…..
To push the distances
by my chest….
Holding the waist of nothing!!

I stopped..
So…
the beautiful flowers Stopped hugging me
horizon’s gate is closed
to face many beams of light alone

but…
trees taught me a wisdom walks
so I walked…

street after street
I crossed the straightness…

I felled down..

I stumbled by her smiling!!

Who had lost his violet smiling? I asked

She turned with a flower between her lips

Step after step

The world getting wide …She whispered
on the nearest ear to her lips

Step after step
Take the lift side….I whispered
“Step forward” … she said

I stepped..
To all directions
I already learned how to walk
On piano’s strings
With bare feet
I learned how to
penetrate memories as well

step after step

silence

say three….I said
To put the world in my account
To continue rambling around your flowers gardens
To stop the sun from getting lost
To dig the earth by our feet

Say…..
You won’t leave me ….!!!
You won’t till the last step
Will you?

Thanx

بائع الورد

The Master · 1 ديسمبر 2003، 15:41

nice touching words dear brother
well done#d
Many thanks for sharing these words with us
do keep it up|e

have you ever · 1 ديسمبر 2003، 17:30

it is soooooo good form you brother

i hope you gonna let us enjoy in many ather topic

thank you alot

بائع الورد · 13 ديسمبر 2003، 12:35

The Master

Have U ever

Thanx alot

Dear HAVE U EVER I like
this forum ,specialy ENG section
and i will try to dom my best

THANX

Whisper · 15 يناير 2004، 1:20

Step after step
that may take us to future at once

or
it may let us back
to the beginning

lovely words that let us remember all the step
that we have through the long way of our lives

stopping at each stage of our age and looking to back
how far did we achieve
or looking forward how far we are going to achieve

and that's all depend in our steps

it is a lovely one but
in the last 2 stanzas i didn't understand you

say three….I said
To put the world in my account
To continue rambling around your flowers gardens
To stop the sun from getting lost
To dig the earth by our feet

in th first line SAY THREE....I SAID
but you mentioned four things after this line

i find a little bit confusing

So what do you mean here Flower seller

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