MY DARK SHADOW

    • MY DARK SHADOW

      hi to all
      back with something new

      hope you will like it


      MY DARK SHADOW

      I draw you a picture
      That is not a normal one
      Inside my mind,
      I create you like
      A dark shadow
      Crossing my imagination
      Printing your steps
      around my brain.

      Following you,
      Imitating you
      Like a dream
      Has an aim
      To keep it going
      To the end of the path.

      A mysterious shadow
      With an attractive magic
      That I keep in following
      To the bright future.

      Drawing, imitating, and following you
      To reach my dream
      And to be a shadow
      Just like you.

    • Dear Scream
      Thank you very much for the nice words, but I really like to ask you, when people write or copy what others write, and like what others write, why is this? when we hear a song or read some words we remember some one dear or some one we hate or...or...or

      SO what did you like about your words and what do they mean to you

      Iam not writing for you dear Scream a lone, I mean us all
      Who is this you wanna draw, imitate, follow? or do we write with no one or nothing in mind

      Yes, let us make every nice thing and matter a discussion and talk, we gonna learn something for sure

      Thank you dear


      Brother
      10derness

    • Thanks Tenderness for your reply
      And I have to admit that you are the first one
      Who ask me about my writing which really makes me feel happy.

      Of course I write for an aim and I usually write when I feel that I want to write. I don't just hold my pen and write for nothing. Writing is spontaneous movement that let you express all your feelings towards something happened to you or it might be a particular accident.

      Ok, do you want to know who is my dark shadow? Well, shall I say
      Or


      I shall let be my little secret


      Ok

      My Dark Shadow is dedicated to my dear father who is away at this period of time
      And I hope that he will return soon inshallah. My father is my dark shadow that I wish to be like him.


      So, Tenderness, it is my turn to ask you now? You said that when we read some words we do remember some people in our minds.. So, did you remember anyone particular in your mind?
      So let us hear your opinion now and don't try to escape from this question.
      See you all

    • Dear Scream
      Thank you very much being honest and open minded
      I read few things for you, and I know your are kind, and now you are proving it again

      Well, I heard them saying like father, like son, and would like to add, like daughter. I was so glad knowing you had your great father in mind writing them lovely words, and the courage sharing them with....I do not like to say it, but strangers

      I hope father is back soon and Iam sure he will be proud, very proud of you

      As for me, Iam sentemental, I like all, and feel concerned for all. I like to be like so many people who came a cross my life, but if I to mention one person I would say my brother Mohammed

      Thank you dear and keep the good work going


      Brother
      10derness

    • Salam All
      Fifteen dear brothers and sisters have been here apart from Scream and myself, and have said nothing, no problem, but I urge you all to say something, anything them nice words leave on you, things that have moved something inside you. Let us hear you, and listen to you.....no matter whether like or dislike.........we are all brothers and sisters here, and make sure none will be upset....we could be one family but with different tastes.....that is natural
      Let us be natural

      All the best


      Brother
      10derness