::"!To You Rose"::

Lavender · 4 يناير 2005، 16:17

sometimes things seem so easy and simple that you don't need to talk about and you feel if you did so,you will sound just silly. Sometime I hear people , mainly elderly, talks of things and matters that seem very clear to me and i say to myself "gash, why are they talking of these things that even kids know!!!". Though, experience of life's small things makes what we once perceived as "simple" graet

When I see a rose
a feeling that ever dwells inside
what infatuation, perfection it holds!
Speaks for every soul
that never find a way closer than a rose

How can it live
In a fragmented world?
Of people speaking of rose but seeking thorns?

Of all my amazement of You lovely Rose
Of all your beauty and pure scented dew,
I down bow for the Divine
Who made you dare to make me cry
When vanishing or ever dry

Lavender

Tenderness · 5 يناير 2005، 11:53

Thank you Lavender, and you are right, we tend to think what our grandfathers and mothers is simple and silly, to find out that what we have said or talked about few years back was silly too, and would not believe it that it was us who said it

This is life, and one day our grandsons and daughters will do the same to us and we will remember then that life changing and what used to be precious one day has lost its value in this crazy world, and like you said
How can it live
In a fragmented world
Of people speaking of rose but seeking thorns

Thanks again dear

وحي القلم · 11 يناير 2005، 16:22

first: lovely poem Lavender... ma shaalllah 3laiki...

second: i often see these thigs but never thought about them or try to get a close perception of them...

... thanks lavender pleased to read this lovely peice

lover323 · 22 يناير 2005، 14:13

woooooooooow
very Good Lavender

really well done ,,,,

I like it ,,,,,, plz keep it up

Lavender · 24 يناير 2005، 18:25

Tenderness كتب:

Thank you Lavender, and you are right, we tend to think what our grandfathers and mothers is simple and silly, to find out that what we have said or talked about few years back was silly too, and would not believe it that it was us who said it

This is life, and one day our grandsons and daughters will do the same to us and we will remember then that life changing and what used to be precious one day has lost its value in this crazy world, and like you said
How can it live
In a fragmented world
Of people speaking of rose but seeking thorns

Thanks again dear

thanks Tenderness for passing by... i was really happy to see your comment in here

I believe you are" right" though rightness and its contrary differ from one to another...there is a great gap between seeing things and perceiving them... between seeing someone within the situation and trying it yourself... between what you perceived once as "trival" and your present attitude towards the same as great or between what you viewed once as precious turned to be a silly thing that u never want to recall again

thanking you again

Lavender · 12 فبراير 2005، 18:07

وحي القلم كتب:

first: lovely poem Lavender... ma shaalllah 3laiki...

second: i often see these thigs but never thought about them or try to get a close perception of them...

... thanks lavender pleased to read this lovely peice

thaks dear

what you said dear usually happens to me or can happen to anyone, as i perceive
:)

Lavender · 9 مارس 2005، 17:11

lover323 كتب:

woooooooooow
very Good Lavender

really well done ,,,,
I like it ,,,,,, plz keep it up

thank you lover323 for your compliment and was was nice of you reading it

sorry for replying you by this time

late but never too late

التنين الاحمر · 9 مارس 2005، 17:42

Lavender كتب:

How can it live
In a fragmented world?
Of people speaking of rose but seeking thorns?

WOW
words couldnt come out of my mouth ~!@n

as i really liked this part

it is sooo true

u r so gifted Lavender

wish i could write as u do

i do have

i never think about rose's & flowers

all i could think of when i write my pomes is the darkness with in me

the darkness which has been hold in me

hope to see more of your work sooon[/align

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