Sorry Dear Mother

آنسه قنبلة · 1 أكتوبر 2003، 22:49

Essalam Aliykom

I have wrote this but I don’t know what do u call it in English I

I don’t know if this is a kind of poetry

It is just feeling in said my heart and I translate it in to this simple words

Sorry Dear Mother

Dear Mother I'm writing these words with bleeding tears in my eyes
I know that I'm disloyal and impious
I'm sorry …that I let them grab you and kill you hundreds of time
Dear I know that what ever I write or say you won't forgive me
I'm the silly cheap who see her mother dying with out saying a word
I live in comfortable life and you are suffering every moment
Yes I know that I am the most impious daughter
But tell me Dear Mother
What can a bird with out wings do?
A bird that has wonderful looks but no value
My heart is bleeding everyday when I hear that other brother martyrdom
And I'm sitting here watching, eating and playing
But believe me Dear Mother I will not drop you like rotten meat
I will support you with my heart and all my emotions
I hope that you will forgive me
And I'm sure that is a victory from God and speedy help in the way

My regards

Your impious daughter

البارون · 2 أكتوبر 2003، 22:13

it is really nice one

when i was reading it , my though told me this is for

Palestine

wonderful

but what do you mean when you said
"I'm sorry …that I let them grab you and kill you hundreds of time

them??? who are them

thanx again

غسااان · 3 أكتوبر 2003، 1:32

Hi Miss Bomb

realy i felt so sad ...God bless ur mother....

we have to look after our parents specially our mother

and I'm woundring as ALBARON do!!???

and how your BROTHERS had martyrdomed ..!!!???

thanx again for shairing us your feeling towords ur MUM

ALLAH bless to ur mum and Bro

cheer's
GHASSAN

Whisper · 8 أكتوبر 2003، 21:59

Thanks a lot dear sister for sharing us this impressive topic
Also I would like to congratulate for having your first step in writing
You have a good future if you keep it and try to improve it

I have to admit that when I read your topic at first I thought it was about the mother
But I went through it again and I found it was about dear mother Palestine
Dear mother that we lost it and throw it for he evil
Endeavor it without any pity ..and we are just watching and unable
To do any thing..

I hope that one day we will be able to support it with
Our blood and our hearts will
Always will be with Dear mother Palestine

آنسه قنبلة · 9 أكتوبر 2003، 0:07

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : البارون
[B]

it is really nice one

when i was reading it , my though told me this is for

Palestine

wonderful

but what do you mean when you said
"I'm sorry …that I let them grab you and kill you hundreds of time

them??? who are them

thanx again
[/B]

thanx brother

I’m happy that u understand my point

((them)) I mean the Americans and Jews and al who hate Arab

hope it’s clear now

آنسه قنبلة · 9 أكتوبر 2003، 0:08

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : غسااان
[B]Hi Miss Bomb

realy i felt so sad ...God bless ur mother....

we have to look after our parents specially our mother

and I'm woundring as ALBARON do!!???

and how your BROTHERS had martyrdomed ..!!!???

thanx again for shairing us your feeling towords ur MUM

ALLAH bless to ur mum and Bro

cheer's
GHASSAN

[/B]

Ghassan brother

I think that u didn’t read it carefully coz I didn’t mean with Mother my real mother but something ales

Read it again and I’m and find out who did I mean by it

Thanx a lot for ur participating

انسة نكتة · 9 أكتوبر 2003، 1:32

THANKS ALOT SISTER ABOUT YOUR GREAT TOBIC|a

The Master · 16 أكتوبر 2003، 20:21

I'd call this Art! Well done, dear sister. You managed to sort words out and put them together in a touching way. Do keep up writing as you really have what it takes. Best wishes|e

آنسه قنبلة · 30 أكتوبر 2003، 0:48

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : Whisper
[B]
Thanks a lot dear sister for sharing us this impressive topic
Also I would like to congratulate for having your first step in writing
You have a good future if you keep it and try to improve it

I have to admit that when I read your topic at first I thought it was about the mother
But I went through it again and I found it was about dear mother Palestine
Dear mother that we lost it and throw it for he evil
Endeavor it without any pity ..and we are just watching and unable
To do any thing..

I hope that one day we will be able to support it with
Our blood and our hearts will
Always will be with Dear mother Palestine
[/B]

Dear whisper

I'm glad that u enjoy it

And thanx a lot for encouraging me

Yes we will ask God to guard them

Always when I watch the news i feel sorrow

Massacre….blood and no reaction from the world

Thanx again sis

آنسه قنبلة · 7 نوفمبر 2003، 0:41

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : انسة نكتة
THANKS ALOT SISTER ABOUT YOUR GREAT TOBIC|a

thanx alot for ur Participate dear

حصاه متقرشعه · 10 نوفمبر 2003، 8:35

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

my dear i want to thank u about this it relly nice and more than beautiful.
yes, the mother is the great thing that people own .
she give us the relax and love$$e
she is every thing in our life not because she is the mother buo because she is the life.
every body most konw that before every thing is going

Those who forget thier mother they should get up from thier sleeeeeeeeeeeping:eek: :eek:

Finaly i thank you agine for that
please go on not stop#d

have you ever · 13 نوفمبر 2003، 1:30

It is realy lovely words from you sister

I hope you gonna let us enjoy many times more

all the best

آنسه قنبلة · 24 نوفمبر 2003، 23:47

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : The Master
[B]I'd call this Art! Well done, dear sister. You managed to sort words out and put them together in a touching way. Do keep up writing as you really have what it takes. Best wishes|e
[/B]

The Master

Many thanx brother for your encouragement

Am glad that u like it and understand it

آنسه قنبلة · 24 نوفمبر 2003، 23:48

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : حصاه متقرشعه
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

[B]my dear i want to thank u about this it relly nice and more than beautiful.
yes, the mother is the great thing that people own .
she give us the relax and love$$e
she is every thing in our life not because she is the mother buo because she is the life.
every body most konw that before every thing is going

Those who forget thier mother they should get up from thier sleeeeeeeeeeeping:eek:
Finaly i thank you agine for that
please go on not stop#d [/B]

Dear sis

Thanx a lot for ur participating

But I think that u misunderstand what I really mean by

“Sorry Dear Mother”

So read it again and carefully and I’m sure that u will get it

Thanx again

آنسه قنبلة · 24 نوفمبر 2003، 23:50

كاتب الرسالة الأصلية : have you ever
[B]
It is realy lovely words from you sister

I hope you gonna let us enjoy many times more

all the best
[/B]

Have u ever

Many thanx for ur reading and participating in my topic

Hope to see other participation from u

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