THE MONSTER

Scream · 29 سبتمبر 2004، 13:56

The Monster

I tried to pass through you
And pretend not seeing you;
Your eyes observed me
And captured my sight.

NO, NO, you are not there
I know that you are not existed.
Why are you following me
And torturing my soul.

I am stronger than you
No matter how
Huge and momentous you are.

I am like a mountain
durable and stable,
in the face of all my enemies.

I will never be weak
And drop a tear
Because I am stronger than you.

No, No, you are not there;
I know that you are not there
And you will never be there
Controlling me,
And I will never drop a tear.

Dedicated to everyone who is struggling with his or her inner soul. But we should sometimes try to find a shoulder to remove our burden and cry.

MY REGARDS
Scream

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 30 سبتمبر 2004، 6:34

Dear Scream,
I understand that one should fight the inner person in him, however the words do sound like trying to get red of that inner person, the inner me is part of me anyway, yes perhaps I should not let the inner me control me, but sometimes the inner me is better the the outter me

I will never drop a tear for something that doesnt deserve or worth noting but if I had to feel relived then I will drop an ocean to feel so.. Thanks for the nice touchy words..

I would really also like to know if you are the author because im very precise about intellectual property and copyrights, and do write your name on every work you do or reference it if it is others' work

Thanks again
Cheers

Scream · 30 سبتمبر 2004، 23:24

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR كتب:

Dear Scream,
I understand that one should fight the inner person in him, however the words do sound like trying to get red of that inner person, the inner me is part of me anyway, yes perhaps I should not let the inner me control me, but sometimes the inner me is better the the outter me

I will never drop a tear for something that doesnt deserve or worth noting but if I had to feel relived then I will drop an ocean to feel so.. Thanks for the nice touchy words..

I would really also like to know if you are the author because im very precise about intellectual property and copyrights, and do write your name on every work you do or reference it if it is others' work

Thanks again
Cheers

Thanks dear Nawar for your lovely reply.Sorry if you felt confussion in reading it. Sometimes, we feel that there is a monster or a little child inside us and we don\thave power sometimes to contoll ourselves.
HOwever, it is beter to have a child inside our sould rather than a monster that lead us to behave and react badly. Sometimes, this monster controll our lives and we refuse to cry for we feel coward if we dropped a tear. I tried to write this topic in ironic way for all those who refuse to drop a tear for they don't want to feel coward....

Most of my topics here in fun and Arts are written by me. And it is an experience and I hope it will improved with time inshallah..

My Regards
Scream

غسااان · 1 أكتوبر 2004، 22:32

Nice words
well organized
although we need to drop
some tear sometimes
its the right medicine for most of sadness

Many thanx 4 sharing it

yours

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 2 أكتوبر 2004، 2:00

Scream كتب:

Thanks dear Nawar for your lovely reply.Sorry if you felt confussion in reading it. Sometimes, we feel that there is a monster or a little child inside us and we don\thave power sometimes to contoll ourselves.
HOwever, it is beter to have a child inside our sould rather than a monster that lead us to behave and react badly. Sometimes, this monster controll our lives and we refuse to cry for we feel coward if we dropped a tear. I tried to write this topic in ironic way for all those who refuse to drop a tear for they don't want to feel coward....

Most of my topics here in fun and Arts are written by me. And it is an experience and I hope it will improved with time inshallah..

My Regards
Scream

No problem, just mention that it's written by you so no one can use it, intellectual property

Cheers

Scream · 2 أكتوبر 2004، 14:51

غسااان كتب:

Nice words
well organized
although we need to drop
some tear sometimes
its the right medicine for most of sadness

Many thanx 4 sharing it

yours

Thanks a lot brother for your comment and reading my words

Sure, we have to drop many tears and that what I want to say through this topic

Scream · 2 أكتوبر 2004، 14:53

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR كتب:

No problem, just mention that it's written by you so no one can use it, intellectual property

Cheers

I do write my name in the end

And i don't think anyone will try to steal my words

eL3aJoOoZ_NaWaR · 2 أكتوبر 2004، 14:59

Scream كتب:

I do write my name in the end

And i don't think anyone will try to steal my words

dont be so naive

ypou are good enough I guess to attract others to stealing your work

Tenderness · 4 أكتوبر 2004، 13:26

Thanks Scream
I liked it really, and I do not feel like changing it into a discussion issue, let us or let me enjoy it as it is

Thanks a lot, and like I said it once, your writings hide a real life behind

Wish you all the best

Scream · 4 أكتوبر 2004، 15:50

Tenderness كتب:

Thanks Scream
I liked it really, and I do not feel like changing it into a discussion issue, let us or let me enjoy it as it is

Thanks a lot, and like I said it once, your writings hide a real life behind

Wish you all the best

Thanks a lot tenderness for your tender words

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